Maryann Miller's "Things that Drive an Editor Crazy"

Maryann Miller, a writer and freelance editor, writes, "I’ve been editing for a long time and am still amazed at how often I see common mistakes repeated over and over again. For instance:

Fred walked out, taking the file with him. You don’t need ‘with him’. If he took the file, it’s with him, DUH!! Or the sentence could be rewritten to make it a little more visual. Fred grabbed the file and walked out." Read more on The Blood-Red Pencil.

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